Night-
Darkness, Shadowy, Quiet, Calm, Stealthy, Soothing, Tranquil
The moon is covered by a blanket of stars,
This is Night.
Day-
Bright, Sunny, Loud, Busy, Silly, Crazy, Full of Laughter
The sun beams down at us, suddenly hiding behind a cloud,
This is Day.
5 comments on “Night VS Day”
Dahlia, The new background is awesome! It so fits with you and this latest piece you wrote. You use words so well to capture a feeling. Keep blogging! I love what you write! I also like how you blanket the moon with stars and hide the sun behind clouds. Highlights some of the sola rotors between night and day.
I think this poem has so much opposition, but it flows beautifully. I mean, one minute it’s dark and gloomy, the next it’s light and cheerful. I think this poem is very beautiful. It also has so much voice mixed in it. It’s really beautiful.
Dahlia, The new background is awesome! It so fits with you and this latest piece you wrote. You use words so well to capture a feeling. Keep blogging! I love what you write! I also like how you blanket the moon with stars and hide the sun behind clouds. Highlights some of the sola rotors between night and day.
I think this poem has so much opposition, but it flows beautifully. I mean, one minute it’s dark and gloomy, the next it’s light and cheerful. I think this poem is very beautiful. It also has so much voice mixed in it. It’s really beautiful.
That….was….beautiful.
This piece that you wrote is like a painting, you can just picture it!
I love how different the two times of day are. This is a really great poem. Good job!